Week 11B

Today I had got very useful feedback for my animation. While much of it was positive and saying that my animation was going in the right direction, I did have a few things that needed to be changed. The feedback that I had received was:

• Blur on moving lines are too intense.
• The type should be more dynamic. Having it remain static is boring in such a fast-paced animation.
• Silhouette of the female smoking is too "blob-like". Although she's a silhouette, her form gets lost and isn't very detailed like it should be. 
• Too many names in the scene with the woman smoking. Reduce this to fewer names. 
• Clarify what each team did. (i.e Art Director, Music, etc.)

Following this advice, I decided to fix the silhouette and simply and hair to it, which I thought was the biggest problem. When taking a second look, the model did look too blob-like, and I feel the cause of that was due to the hair on the model getting lost in the body.